Introduction: For my final draft I changed the opening sentences of my introduction. I felt that in my first draft my hook was not strong and that I needed to introduce Gee and Cuddy and the main point of my paper. I also changed my thesis by making it more direct and understandable for readers. I feel that I made my thesis more visible and introduced the topic more in my final draft compared to my first draft.

Evidence and Explanations: In comparing my first draft to my final draft I added a lot more explanations to my final draft and went into more detail than compared to my first draft. I went into more detail with the explanation of power poses, mushfake, and fake it till you become it. I went into more detail on these points because I thought it was unclear to the readers and that if I went into more detail it would make my paper stronger and more understandable to readers. 

Reorganization: I did move some sentences and paragraphs around. I moved one articulate paragraph so that it was my first body paragraph. I did this because in that paragraph I went into detail on what a Discourse. So later in my paper when I discussed Discourse I knew my reader would have an idea of what a Discourse is.

New Paragraphs: I did add new paragraphs like my 3rd body paragraph. I added this paragraph so that I could explain mushfake and fake it till you become it more clearly for the readers to better understand. I think this paragraph gives more depth into my paper.