1. My peers think I might be doing affirm and add. There was evidence in the narratives that I’ve left out of the draft so far that I could add to make my paper stronger in the final draft. In my paper, I am trying to inform the reader about being a victim and how a victim literacy narrative can change into a success narrative over time.

2. My peers thought that I needed some more to my introduction when explaining A/B/W. I think in my introduction I need to discuss the sources more and summarize them so the readers get an understanding of what I am talking about.

3. For my evidence, I think that the ones I have in my draft are good ones to include but I also think that I can find one or maybe two more that can connect in a different way than the previous literacy narratives that I used. I think that doing this would add a lot to my paper in the final draft.